I wish i could see her every night,
Every day in every sight.
So stare, and stare would I,
Eyes fixed on a cloudless sky.
I wish I could survive,
[see this awesome pic by Sandeep.]
So stare, and stare would I,
Eyes fixed on a cloudless sky.
I wish that she would dance,
She would fly in a graceful stance.
A silky gown she would wear,
And give the sky a shiny scar to bear.
I wish i could hold her hands,
Hold her close and hold her tight,
Embrace her into a lovely waltz,
Which would even the heavens exalt.
I wish I could survive,
Could dream and could stay alive,
In hope of the day I would unite
With my ever eluding woman of light.
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I am sure most of you haven't any clue as to what i am rhyming about.
The story goes like this. I have never seen a falling star in my life (so uncool, i KNOW!!). This attempt at a poem is for the lady of my life whoever she might be and wherever she might be, because I haven't seen her either. So I thought it might be appropriate to compare her with a falling star, neither of whom have met in my life. And I wish upon a falling star (some star ought to be falling at some place!! :) ) that I the day I see a falling star, its a sign that I meet my lady as well. So, please do pray that I do see a falling star. I am in no hurry, so you can take your time to include it in the list of things that you will be asking God.
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ReplyDeleteits beautiful....great man...great stuff...well, neither did i see a falling star but i made somebody my star rather....keep walking!!!
ReplyDeleteCool man...you are back with your poems - which means you are at your best!!
ReplyDeleteand I wish you find the lady of your life first before you see a falling star...;)
That was awesome!! Wish you see the falling star soon and spread all the light and joy :)
ReplyDelete@Voice Od Silence: Thanks man... Great you found one, congrats ... :D ...
ReplyDelete@Srivatsa : Thanks man and more thanks for your wishes....
@Seema: Thanks a lot madam... :)
Lovely Poem..
ReplyDeleteYou should always write such cheerful POSTS.
Btw, you could have also described your dream LADY LOVE.. :P
lovely poem da! :)
ReplyDeletegood that u posted the meaning too! for people like me (Read - illiterate in poetry), it helps a lot! :)
n wishing u all the best with meteors and to meet your life's starry attraction! :)
wish that u see a fallin star soon and u catch it properly..!!! :P
ReplyDelete@Bhumika: Thanks.. :).. I will try madam.. :)
ReplyDeleteI dnt know how she looks like, then how can I describe.. :P
@Tony : Thanks a lot :) .. both for the comment and the wishes.. :)
@Manja : I will catch it properly man... I cant let it fall .. ;)
Lovely thought presented in intriguing way........Your explanation helped me appreciate the poem a lot, thanks....Keep penning poems more often ... you are good at it.
ReplyDeleteHAVE A NICE DAY!!
WISH YOU MEET YOUR LOVE SOON..AND WISH YOU A HAPPY LIFE
ReplyDeleteScintillating.!
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely dedication.
Wishes and prayers for the two of you:)
@dreamer: thank you.
ReplyDelete@Anon : I know who u r.. :)
@Mohita: Thanks a lot..
heyy rahul! wishing upon a falling star for your soulmate eh? super romantic! :D
ReplyDelete"A silky gown she would wear,
And give the sky a shiny scar to bear."
i loved that part!
umm and that picture by sandeep! brought back memories...
believe it or no, when i was in class 4, me and my 3 best friends used to draw something similar and call it "dream colony"! we had all our houses together.. and a pool.. and gardens and stuff! haha...
great post..
cheers!
Hey!This is a stranger...:)..however,found your poem Sweet & the explanation sweeter ! :)Wish you catch your fallin' star soon..Gudluck!!:)
ReplyDelete"Fate is kind.
She brings to those who love
The sweet fulfillment of
Their secret yearnings.
Like a bolt out of the blue,
Fate steps in to see you through.
When you wish upon a star
Your dreams come true."
---- Sneha :)
@clueless: thank you.. well for once I thought i would be romantic :)
ReplyDelete@Sneha: Thanks a lot for your wishes!!! and for the good verses as well
Hai rahul...awesome poem...hope u will find ur falling star soon..all the best...
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